Lion Heart by Amanda Jones
You came out of the sea,
skin dappled scales of sunlight;
Riding crests, waves of fish in your fists.
Washed up, your gills snapped shut.
Water whipped the first breath of your lungs,
Your lips’ bud teased by morning mists.
You conquered the shore, its ivory coast.
Your legs still rocked with the memory of waves.
Sinews of sand ran across your back-
Rising runes of your oceanic origins.
Your heart thumped- an animal skin drum
heralding the coming of a prince.
In the jungle, amid rasping branches,
trees loosened their shadows to shroud you.
The prince beheld you then, a golden sheen.
Your eyes, two flickers; emerald blaze
You settled back on fluent haunches;
The squall of a beast. your roar, your call.
In crackling boats, seeds arrived, wind-blown,
You summoned their colours to the palm
of your hand, folded them snugly into loam,
watched saplings swaddled in green,
as they sunk roots, spawned shade,
and embraced the land that embraced them.
Centuries, by the sea’s pulmonary,
a vein throbbing humming bumboatsyour
trees rise as skyscrapers.
Their ankles lost in swilling water,
as they heave themselves higher
above the mirrored surface.
Remember your self: your raw lion heart,
Each beat a stony echo that washes
through ribbed vaults of buildings.
Remember your keris, iron lightning
ripping through tentacles of waves,
double-edged, curved to a pointflung
high and caught unsheathed, scattering
five stars in the red tapestry of your sky.
Poem Analysis:
This poem proudly describes Singapore, the home of the Poet,
with its 6 stanzas, each containing 6 lines, except the last one which contains
3 lines, and no rhyme scheme. The poet cleverly uses the Merlion to symbolize
the magnificence and pride of her home country.
Alliteration has been used in places like “rising runes”, “saplings
Swaddled”, “spawned shade”, to create better descriptions. The poet labels that
the Merlion rises out of the sea, clutching the its prey under its fists. “You
conquered the shore” shows that now the creature has settled down in that
island. This line is also supported by “trees loosened their shadows to shroud
you”. Later on, in the 4rth stanza, the
line “In crackling boats, seeds arrived wind-blown” shows how other people
(seeds) became attracted to the beautiful island. The rest of the stanza uses powerful
imagery in order to represent how it welcomed the beings with warmth and how
they prosper. The next stanza is
dedicated to the progression of the country, saying “your trees rise as skyscrapers”
The last 2 stanzas remind the Merlion of its pride, “your raw
lion heart”, its strength, “Iron lighting ripping through the tentacles of the
waves”. The author concludes the poem by using a wonderful metaphor, “five
starts in the red tapestry of your sky”, to signify the flag of Singapore.
Research Content:
The young poet, Amanda Chong was a published writer since she
was 11 years old and also an award winning poet at the early age of 16. She is
the latest student of Singapore to win the Angus Ross Award. Her story, named
“What The Modern Woman Want” was bagged in the top spot in Commonwealth Essay
Competition, in the year of 2004. In 2005, she took the most prestigious poetry
prize, “Foyle Young Poets of the Year”. Being an A-level topper of English
Literature, she is now studying Law at Cambridge University.
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